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Hello! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
This is a truly beautiful image, it`s very delicate and sensitive, I particulary love the colours and the neatness, I also believe you did an incredible job with the horizon and the way it gets lost. However, there are some things I suggest you to adjust about it:
First of all the whole photo looks a bit "floaded". If you had let a bit more of the beach it would have looked better because the water wouldn`t have taken over and so it would have given the photo some more air. Secondly, the colours look a bit washed out, you should try to enhance the colours a bit more, maybe make orange more noticeable. If you have a laptop I suggest you to push your screen back a little and then you will see what I am talking about <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>. Also, The photo is too dark in the front and too bright in the back. you could try to mentain the same level of brightness on the back of the photo or maybe darken it a bit more on the bright spot. Not much, just enough to make a subtle difference.
Overall, it is a very beautiful photo, it just needs a bit of retouching.
Keep up the great job! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>